Ribs shook
Teeth chattered
A swig of Alligator Juice
Testing intestinal fortitude
Crying Esophagus
Liquid to soothe the deserted soul
Reviving the hostile lungs
Defining the edges and nerves
Overtaken by the emptiness
As he fills his stomach
with acidic Alligator Juice
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“Liquid to sooth a deserted soul” That is very moving. How we all feel empty at times. You’re words made me feel. Great job Braeden!
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Very true! Thank you so much Stella!
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You are very welcome!:)
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Great write B.
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Thank you Anthony! Look forward to your comments
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Attempting to bring life where you feel dead and numbness when you feel too much… feel the burn.
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That’s a great way to put it Tara! Thanks
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nice
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Thank you
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Algo necesario para los amantes de lo extraño
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Thank you!
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a very accurate depiction of the magical properties of hard liquor. 🙂
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Exactly! Thank you
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Very appropriate description of ‘the alligator juice’ 🙂
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Thank you!
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Pleasure 🙂
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