Trampled Feelings Pass (Braeden’s Writing Challenge #2)

Goodbye desolate shivers

Goodbye forgotten aches

Goodbye swallowed tears

Goodbye opaque walls

Goodbye erratic fears

Goodbye discarded pages

Goodbye to a dark clown’s frown

Goodbye to a lightless mirage

Goodbye to my lost and last words

Goodbye to the faceless sun

Goodbye meaningless friendships

Goodbye somber passions

Goodbye sensitive heart

Goodbye drowning memories

Goodbye deep blue sky

Goodbye unread poetry

Goodbye Trampled Feelings Pass

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cariboucrossingsak says:

January 9, 2018 at 10:21 pm

I could easily say goodbye to some of those. But others… not so easy. Great poem.

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1. braedenmichaels says:
  
  January 9, 2018 at 10:22 pm
  
  I hear ya, thank you Tara!
  
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findingmywaytosolidground says:

February 10, 2018 at 10:12 pm

This actually brought tears to my eyes, as I am so ready, beyond ready, to just walk the fuck away from everyone and everything.

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1. braedenmichaels says:
  
  February 10, 2018 at 10:23 pm
  
  I didn’t mean to do that.
  
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findingmywaytosolidground says:

February 10, 2018 at 10:28 pm

I know you didn’t. But it’s all good. You should go see what I did last night. Greatest fucking mistake ever. Signing my divorce papers Monday. Taking them to work, and being as I work at a bank, notaries are everywhere, signing them. And he can come get them when I get home and give me the keys to the house.

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leegschrift says:

April 15, 2018 at 4:59 pm

Off we go!

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1. braedenmichaels says:
  
  April 15, 2018 at 5:00 pm
  
  Thank you for reading!
  
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