I’m so fucking mad
About the day I had
She wasn’t glad
That I kissed Chad
I’m so freaking upset
About what I didn’t get
She was part of the bet
By Monday she will forget
I’m so undesirably distraught
About the day I lost
She was happy I got caught
My feelings can’t be bought
I’m so damn pissed
About the day I missed
She was in the A list
By the weekend I cut my wrist
Well written. You expressed the emotions well.
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Thanks
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You’ve perfectly captured the lows of the adolescent mind! Also the rhyme and rhythm…very remniscent of school days! 🙂
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That was the goal and wanted it to sound like a child. Thanks 😊
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“Childishly” clever .you captured it all !
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I tried lol
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Wonderfully cynical! I loved it
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Thank you so much
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My Pleasure !
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Oh bloody hell! That last line! What a shocker!
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Yes it is!
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Very nice rhyming. Please, don’t cut your wrists!, I would tell anybody in that situation. If one love relationship fails there are so many other women (and also men) out there.
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Yes I agree! I wouldn’t want that either
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