Acquaintances and formalities
shook hands with the Devil’s tongue
Saliva drips down to the
center of honesty and disintegrated
Kindness only filled a shot glass
As gulps of uncertainty surrounded
glass scarecrows and empty vigilantes
Stale friendships vanish in the mist
Faded signs were torn down
Three bedroom houses decomposed
Laughter is a decaying tooth
As you turn on this fragmented road
This one….almost tells a story of a life. A tortured, but once filled life. Still living, but sees snapshots of what once was in their minds eye, what they see life as now. At least that’s how I see it, anyway. I ❤ this one
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Thanks.
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This is really great.
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Thanks Tara!
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Awesome imagination! Its one of the most finest ballads I’ve ever read. ✨ Beautiful!
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Awe thank you so much!
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Yes! Your creativity is great! A Blessing to the world of creative writing! 😀
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lol you are so kind! 😉
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Thanks! My religion is kindness! I follow it! ✨❤
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That’s a awesome religion!
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😊✨
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I’m sure I’ve said it before but damn this is good.
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I’m glad you think this is good!
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In my mind, I see a man sitting at a bar slowly drinking his life away while all around him the world moves on in fast forward. His thoughts occasionally slipping in and out of the reality of things: friendships are shallow, based only in the comradery of drink, relationships come and fail, work is a necessary evil, home is a dark cave, laughter is hollow, full of cynicism…. and still he raises the glass.
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Now that is a great POV! I’m glad you look at it like that!
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Gorgeous
I seem to have missed a lot of your posts, I think the word press gods are being mean to me
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Awe thank you! No worries, you are here now! Glad to see you 😉
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So deep and dark! Meaningful in its own way.🍁
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Thank you for reading and commenting! ❤️🙏
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