Sorrow’s Lyrics

by braedenmichaels on July 31, 2018November 19, 2020

Crinkled stars

Above all the broken hearts

Lost in direction

Hope is found

On the frozen ground

Losing its affection

The pieces are missing

Dandelions are kissing

My world is aching

I want what she has

I want it just as bad

I want something breathtaking

Could you play a melody

and add another verse

Could you play a guitar

to remove all the hurt

11 Comments

cariboucrossingsak says:

November 7, 2017 at 9:43 pm

Absolutely gorgeous. Plus there are dandelions, which I adore. Give me a field of dandelions over a bouquet of flowers any day 😍

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1. braedenmichaels says:
  
  November 7, 2017 at 9:44 pm
  
  Thank you – that’s great to know, very simplistic.
  
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2. cariboucrossingsak says:
  
  November 7, 2017 at 9:50 pm
  
  ….just like me.
  
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3. braedenmichaels says:
  
  November 7, 2017 at 9:51 pm
  
  Lol
  
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Lost soul says:

November 8, 2017 at 2:10 am

It’s a stunning piece.

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1. braedenmichaels says:
  
  November 8, 2017 at 4:09 am
  
  Thank you so much!
  
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1. braedenmichaels says:
  
  July 31, 2018 at 3:35 am
  
  Thank you!
  
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Stiri media online says:

July 31, 2018 at 3:35 am

……from small thoughts you create great poems.Congratulations!

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1. braedenmichaels says:
  
  July 31, 2018 at 3:36 am
  
  Thank you so much!
  
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tara caribou says:

August 21, 2019 at 10:03 pm

I love the line: “dandelions are kissing”
I just love this whole piece but that line is magical.

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1. braedenmichaels says:
  
  August 21, 2019 at 10:35 pm
  
  Thank you Tara! 😊
  
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