Eyeballing the coordinates
Interpreting and measuring the angles
Shoveled efforts plead cases
in the clay and dim ground
Removed discussions and grief
Presenting facts and disregarding
lethal gut wrenching emotion
Pulling left to be right
Pushing right to be wrong
Winning is irrelevant and misguided
Grazing thoughts of compassion
Understanding points of view
Too much gray between black and white
Indecisiveness stands still
One sided lie
Two sided truths
Equal broken indifferences and shadows
Beautiful… ❤ Love the depth of insight in this. And the imagery. Great post!!
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Thank you Natalie!
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I can’t find the words to express what Ibfeel about this, but it touched me deeply
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So you understand it? I wonder if it’s too abstract
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I FEEL it. I feel that I understand it but can’t quite put it into words.
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It’s written using some geometry terms to show exactness or preciseness in an argument. But often times we spend too much time proving people wrong rather than understanding a POV.
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Yes, I saw it that it is more important to prove a point than to show compassion orto allow for grief. No, it was not too abstract for me, and it would lose something if you tried to make it less absteact. I like it very much indeed
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I’m glad you got that – I have a job where I use a lot of geometry lol
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I hated geometry at school, but actually it is very beautiful. It has a beauty all of its own. I like how you used it here
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I’m glad you see it like that! Thank you Lorraine
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You are welcome
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This is really deep and beautifully written; I had to read through two or three times to get the full meaning but it was utterly worth it :O)
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Thank you Tara!
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Lisa 😉
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Whoops I’m sorry.
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No worries 😊
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😍😍😍😍
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Thank you!
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‘One sided lie
Two sided truths’
This is such a fantastic poem, Braeden. Loved these lines, specially 🙂
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Thank you!
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My pleasure 🙂
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