Here are is the link and lyrics below. Please tell me what you think.

https://suno.com/song/8ff46066-67ec-4e01-9de7-74fc14e08fac


Hollow Tears

(1st Verse)
I am terrified of the darkness sitting still
I am terrified of my identity getting killed
I am terrified of the loneliness and isolation
I am terrified of the water down hallucinations

CHORUS:
All I have are hollow tears that fell from the cracked moon
All I have is a heart that has been broken too soon
All I have are years that feel wasted and gone
All I have are tragic lyrics to a hopeless song

(2nd Verse)
I am terrified of the light being gone forever
I am terrified of the pieces I can’t put back together
I am terrified of the blistering walls caving in
I am terrified of not knowing where to begin

CHORUS:
All I have are hollow tears that fell from the cracked moon
All I have is a heart that has been broken too soon
All I have are years that feel wasted and gone
All I have are tragic lyrics to a hopeless song

Bridge:
With these hollow tears,
I traced the outline of my pain
With these hollow tears,
I am drowning in this pouring rain
With these hollow tears,
my eyes don’t see a glimpse of change

CHORUS:
All I have are hollow tears that fell from the cracked moon
All I have is a heart that has been broken too soon
All I have are years that feel wasted and gone
All I have are tragic lyrics to a hopeless song


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I thought for fun I can take a poem title of mine and write lyrics for it. Tell me what you think. Click on the link!

https://suno.com/song/59d04fe4-12d8-4eab-bb66-894083216aeb


Blackout’s Rattle

(1st Verse)
Once upon a midnight breeze
I inhaled mourning and choked on my tragedies
and I begin to stare into the raven’s lungs
I began to speak with animosity on my tongue
and I begin to allow the poison seep in my skin
I am the one who carries truth laced in sin

CHORUS:
I woke up to the sound of the blackout’s rattle
crawling between insomnia and my battles
my ears are bleeding from my punctured eardrum
crawling between my stolen lies and the bullets of my gun

(2nd Verse)
I exhaled bitterness and coughed up illusions
and I begin to dance with my spots of my confusion
I began to shout with sorrow dripping from my lips
and I begin to allow the ignorance give me a lethal kiss
I began to shed the light and my heart turned to stone
I am the one who walks with fear and brittle bones

CHORUS:
I woke up to the sound of the blackout’s rattle
crawling between insomnia and my battles
my ears are bleeding from my punctured eardrum
crawling between my stolen lies and the bullets of my gun

Bridge:
Once upon a thousand lies
truth disappears as followers wave goodbye
The paint on the face begins to dry
as everything alive begins to die

CHORUS:
I woke up to the sound of the blackout’s rattle
crawling between insomnia and my battles
my ears are bleeding from my punctured eardrum
crawling between my stolen lies and the bullets of my gun

CHORUS:
I woke up to the sound of the blackout’s rattle
crawling between insomnia and my battles
my ears are bleeding from my punctured eardrum
crawling between my stolen lies and the bullets of my gun

Don’t pull the trigger, get on your knees
Look up to God and believe


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(1st Verse)
I want you to be the rain in my Indian summer
I want you to be my queen of magic under the covers
I want you to be the sun on my darkest day
I want you to be my symphony on center stage
I want you to be my candlelight in the dark
I want you to be the butterflies circling around my heart

CHORUS
Come on baby,
I know you can feel it too
I can see my life with you
Come on baby,
I want to feel you in my arms
I want to wake up knowing you are my lucky charm

(2nd Verse)
I want you to be the light breeze in my storms
I want you to be my blanket to keep me warm
I want you to be my laughter when I want to cry
I want you to be my forever engraved in the sky
I want you to be my shining sliver wings
I want you to be my everything

Bridge:
I can see us walking hand in hand
I can see you being my woman and me your man
I can feel something growing stronger each day
I just want to love you in every single way
Come on baby, I know you feel the same

CHORUS


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(1st Verse)
I’m an exhausted lover on the inside
A part of me just needs a friend
I need something that I can truly feel
There is a part of me that can no longer pretend
I need someone that can care and not just take
I need someone that can’t be fake

CHORUS:
I’m tired of building shit on quicksand
I’m tired of treading water, can you reach out your hand
I’m tired of falling and hitting face first into the ground
I’m tired of screaming on the inside where no one can hear a sound
And you know who you are
Just like me, I’m crying within these invisible scars

(2nd Verse)
I’m a broken man who needs some understanding
A part of me needs someone like myself
I need something that I know is real
There is a part of me that can admit needs some help
I need someone that can care and can give
I need someone that knows how to live

CHORUS

And I can hear those words loud and clear
And I know deep inside you have the same fears
And you know who you are
And I can feel the doubt and danger
And I know we are distant strangers
And you know who you are
And I’m writing verses with you in my head
And I’m like you, lonely in this bed
And you know who you are

CHORUS


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(1st Verse)
I’ve got butterflies in verses
dreams waiting patiently in the dark
I’ve got the saxophone playing on the curb
whispers breathing in my heart
I’ve got solitude sitting in the corner
fears waiting out in the cold
I’ve got memories standing on the hill
But I’ve got love dancing in my soul

Chorus:
Endless pages,
ballerinas gliding on a summers day
Endless pages,
magicians and thieves walking in the circus parade
Endless pages,
the wind twisting in your sparkling eyes
Endless pages,
filled with autumns truth and winter lies
In in the end, together we will be singing a lullaby

(2nd Verse)
I’ve got dragonflies in my paragraphs
stanzas with lightning and thunder
I’ve got violins in my bittersweet symphony
clouds disappear in my sense of wonder
I’ve got rage bleeding between the lines
insomnia running down an awaken road
I’ve got sunflowers smiling in the shade
But I’ve got love dancing in my soul

CHORUS:

Bridge:
I’ve seen tenderness in the eyes of a child
I’ve seen affection in your precious smile
I’ve seen warmth in an old poor man
I’ve seen angels on earth in God’s plans
I’ve seen blessings in all of life’s stages
I’ve seen divine circles on my endless pages

CHORUS


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Maria laid down some finger tapping,
cement cracking, soul jerking, blue collar working, southern catfish blues
Maria crooned a seaside melody, number one remedy, a splash of sass, with a heavenly blast,
A feel good sunshine kind of tune

Chet was blaring his shiny trombone
JJ was banging his drum with his golden sticks
Ryan was strumming his acoustic guitar
And all the neighbors rocked until dark

And she will get you to clap your hands every ten seconds
And she will get you to move your feet in rhythm
And she will take away all your pain for a while
And she will make you forget what is missing
And if you make a left on Rolling Thunder you can hear the guitar playing
And when you drive away you can feel the earth swaying…

Maria cried out “Sha la la” with a swirl, a vintage southern girl, hitting high notes with a grin, no losers here all the jesters win, music playing all day and night
Maria dancing with a glide, happiness soaring in her eyes, carrying a enigmatic glow, putting on a show, her voice shinning so bright

And she will get you to clap your hands every ten seconds
And she will get you to move your feet in rhythm
And she will take away all your pain for a while
And she will make you forget what is missing
And if you make a left on Rolling Thunder you can hear the guitar playing
And when you drive away you can feel the earth swaying…

Chet was blaring his shiny trombone
JJ was banging his drum with his golden sticks
Ryan was strumming his acoustic guitar
And all the neighbors rocked until dark


My books are available here.