The Fish’s Revenge

Twitching Gills

All along the ocean

Long thick strings

holding fake plastic

items to hook the

corners of the mouth

Faithfully swimming

in schools around

the invisible lines

baiting the jaws of a

tormented shark

creeping underneath

the rustic boat

slowly ramming the boat

viciously to startle

the fishermen

In fright the boat rushes

back to the Florida land

Not realizing all the creatures

under the divine waters

work in unison


  1. This is beautiful, spent over 15 minutes reading the poem, i read it over and over and over again, it is an interesting poem and shows the power of unison and fishes too lol. Nice work

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    1. You’re welcome Braeden! Your poetic voice…I often wonder if someone hurt you along your journey, or if your Fire comes from your soul!? No need to answer, this wasn’t a question 🙂. Shine bright! Go get em’!

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