I’ve offered you a ship and you offer me a canoe
I’ve offered you a dozen roses and you offer me a dandelion
Sadness is a trigger
I’ve offered you a plate of everything and you offer me a morsel
I’ve offered you a road and you offer me a unpaved narrow path
Sadness is a trigger
I’ve offered you a tree of gold and you offer me a stained branch
I’ve offered you a notebook and you offer me a page
Sadness is a trigger
I’ve offered you barrel of ink and you offer me a ballpoint pen
When I’m gone my written words will say it all
I like how you played with the opposite here. Melody in your verses.
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Thank you!
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Welcome.
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That’s the thing with relationships. Any kind of relationship. There’s got to be an equal amount of give and take (in my opinion) for it to be viable.
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And PS: I love dandelions! Haha! (But I knew what you were saying in that line.)
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Thank you! lol
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Exactly! Thank you Tara!
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Beautifully bitter :O) x
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Thank you Lisa!
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