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Underline the word love

Find it’s significance

Absorb it’s emphasis

I’m not allowed to

convey with my tongue

But only my heart

Struggling between

physical and emotional love

Overpowering sensations

pierce me

Gushing rivers flow through

my erotic mind

Trying to find the meaning

of long lasting love

in this empty discussion


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21 Comments

  1. Wonderfully written as always. You just need to correct a little thing here on lines 2 and 3: “Find it’s significance/ Absorb it’s emphasis” should be “its” not “it’s” because they are possessive adjectives not contracted forms of it+is or it+has. I especially love this:

    “Struggling between

    physical and emotional love

    Overpowering sensations

    pierce me

    Gushing rivers flow through

    my erotic mind”

    Liked by 1 person

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