I treat our love
like a credit card
and push it to the
maximum limit
I’m willing to do
whatever it takes
to make you happy
You treat our love
like the payment
of a credit card
and only pay the
bare minimum
I’m ready to pay it
all off and start over
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well constructed 🙂
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Thank you so much
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Hahaha! Well played.
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Thank you 😉
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interesting concept
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Thank you
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🙂
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Damn! I love this ❤️
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Thanks
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So true…lol
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Unfortunately yes
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Ha ha there might be someone who this credit card love works for…….sadly😉
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Yes lol
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pay it all off, take a pair of scissors to it, THEN start over lol
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Correct I should have added that
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Sad 😦
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Yes it is
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To be honest, one of the saddest things I’ve read. Tears sad………crawl into bed, cover my head and block out life sad.
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But it happens. It’s just reality for some.
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Reality here.
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I’m sure
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Its such a beautiful metaphor! 😀 I loved this one!!
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Thank you!
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I only understood this poetry. The main reason is that you are very rich and of course you have a card. On this card is all your love that gives you the inspiration to write.Congratulations !
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Thank you for seeing that!
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Well written
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Thanks!
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The thing is, it’s got to be reciprocal from both sides. Each one investing as much as they want returns on. So if one only wants a little return, then by all means only put in a little. But if one wants grand dividends, one must invest… but in the end, it will be worth it, imo.
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That’s a great point of view, what you put into it is what you get!
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Well, it should be, anyway.
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Exactly! Thanks
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