(1st verse)
It hit me like a cannonball,
You could see it on the other side of the wall.
It hit me like a freight train,
Maybe that’s why I’m going insane.
I don’t know how to stop time from sitting still,
I didn’t realize how much silence really kills.
Chorus:
We took something perfect,
Now we are slowly removing the parts that made it work.
We took something perfect,
Maybe I didn’t notice but maybe you felt the pain first.
I don’t know how to be strong,
Just like you, it will be hard to carry on.
(2nd Verse)
It hit me like a tons of bricks,
I couldn’t see how much I would truly miss.
It hit me like a morning car crash,
I always thought this was built to last.
I don’t know how to stop it from rolling down the hill,
I didn’t realize how much silence really kills.
Chorus:
We took something perfect,
Now we are slowly removing the parts that made it work.
We took something perfect,
Maybe I didn’t notice but maybe you felt the pain first.
I don’t know how to be strong,
Just like you, it will be hard to carry on.
Bridge:
I never thought it could get better than this.
I never thought it would be everything I would miss.
I never thought it would hurt so much,
I never thought I would have to bottle this up.
It feels like I have to be the strong one,
I can’t have you see me come undone.
Chorus:
We took something perfect,
Now we are slowly removing the parts that made it work.
We took something perfect,
Maybe I didn’t notice but maybe you felt the pain first.
I don’t know how to be strong,
Just like you, it will be hard to carry on.
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Beautiful
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This flows so well. Very good! So good I read it many times but I do that with all your pieces.
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Awe thank you!
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This is really wonderful. I feel it. I had to read it through several times, it’s so good. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you Tara!
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Masterful! The pain is indeed always mutual, no matter who started what.
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Awe thank you so much and agree!
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Woww!
You should really sing it… and well…. put it in here… it’ll be amazing
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Thank you but I need music too lol
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I still can’t write a lyric poem. You done an awesome one here. You must put it to music , if you haven’t already.
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I wish I could add music – Thank you….I could teach you
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Wow. Will take you up on that one day. Thank you 😊
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My pleasure
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Nice! It seems when we ask for something perfect, yet when we get it, we don’t know how to receive it, without destroying it. Great lyrics, only you know the music needed. I hope to see this turn into a song someday. Great!
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Trust me I would love to add music to it! Thank you so much for the compliment.
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When you wrote it, did you not hear music in your thoughts?
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I did, I can hear piano. I see it as a ballad.
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Exactly, that’s what I meant. It’s happen to me a lot, although I need to write it down, lol! SO hopefully, one day we’ll hear those ballads in reality.
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Yes Tiffany lol
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☺️
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