Crinkled stars
Above all the broken hearts
Lost in direction
Hope is found
On the frozen ground
Losing its affection
The pieces are missing
Dandelions are kissing
My world is aching
I want what she has
I want it just as bad
I want something breathtaking
Could you play a melody
and add another verse
Could you play a guitar
to remove all the hurt
Absolutely gorgeous. Plus there are dandelions, which I adore. Give me a field of dandelions over a bouquet of flowers any day 😍
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Thank you – that’s great to know, very simplistic.
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….just like me.
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Lol
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It’s a stunning piece.
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you!
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……from small thoughts you create great poems.Congratulations!
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Thank you so much!
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I love the line: “dandelions are kissing”
I just love this whole piece but that line is magical.
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Thank you Tara! 😊
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